His Witness by Vanessa WaltzSeries: Vittorio Crime Family #1
on December 27, 2014
Genres: Adult, Romance
PJV Quickie: Wow! I took a chance on His Witness (I don’t normally start with the 4th book in a series) and was not disappointed. His Witness starts off strong and grabs your attention immediately. I had a few issues that I’ll discuss below, but I spent most of the book fascinated with the characters, especially the Hero’s mafia life.
All Melanie Ronaldo wanted was to go to college and have a normal life like her friends. Instead, she’s running her father’s club and working with the mafia. Her father’s restaurant business was failing and he made some bad decisions, now they can’t get out because the mafia uses the club. She hates when the guys come in and store their drugs and money.
Tommy O’Sullivan is a half-Irish, half-Italian mobster. He was taken in by Jack, the mafia boss, when he was younger, and he found that being the mob’s butcher (in more ways than one) helps with his anger issues. He’s taken with Melanie, the girl who runs one of the clubs – she’s got a sassy mouth and doesn’t take shit from anyone. And she’s sexy as hell. Unfortunately, he can’t convince her to go out with him.
When Melanie is trapped into being the government’s star witness against the mafia, Jack needs her to recant her testimony. Tommy knows this is his chance to grab her…and keep her.
I am a sucker for mob romance, kidnapping stories, and BDSM stories, so of course I hit the “one click” button. I have to tell you the story jumps right in on page one – Tommy is doing what he does best, which is killing people for the mob. He’s the best at what he does and he takes pleasure in making people suffer before they die. I have to be honest, Tommy fascinated me: he’s sick and twisted and vulnerable and volatile and is a pretty complex character. Melanie is a good match for him: fiesty and furious but an overall nice person. I liked the way their story progressed…up until the kidnapping.
Once the kidnapping occurred, I feel like the story lost some of it’s complexity and attention to detail. Tommy wants to break her and make her dependent on him, and we get glimpses of that but the story skips over a lot of the details and lets the reader fill in the blanks themselves – the blurb says “day by day” but I feel like we only got a few days here and there. The good thing about His Witness is that I was so into the story that I did fill in the blanks and went with it, but I did feel like it weakened the story.
I don’t know anything about mob life or the RICO act or how the FBI handles their undercover cases, so I can’t vouch for any accuracy or non-accuracy in the story. I found it to be interesting and couldn’t stop reading to find out what was going to happen next.
I’m always leery of reading a new-to-me self published author because usually the grammar and editing is bad, but that’s not the case with His Witness. I think there were 2 or 3 spots where I had to re-read a sentence but other than that, grammar and spelling were not an issue.
This is book 4 in the series but can be read as a stand-alone; I didn’t read the first three and I don’t feel like I’d missed any back story. Now that I’ve read His Witness, however, I am going to go back and read the first three books in the series.
If you read and enjoyed Kresley Cole’s The Professional, or Jill Myles and Jen Frederick’s Last Hit series, I’d recommend giving His Witness a try. For 99¢ it’s definitely worth the read. Also, I never watched the show Dexter, but from what I heard about it, I think His Witness might appeal to fans of the show.